I'm very much pleasured to see that you're able to complete the task despite it is quite challenging and unfamiliar to us, somehow you managed to sustain you passion in pursuing English proficiency, I admire your dedication and perseverance. After all, most of us have all gone this far and finally ...
Speaking of sentence structure, please don't worry about it, if you look at Jack ma（马云）, if you look at the sentence structure he's composing, it is awfully plain and simple. Since he articulated his message lound and clear, delivered his speech with insights and wisdom, he converyed his passion ...
